BSA 225 - Plot
Log Line
- A lonely girl living in a field gets a surprise one night when a star falls from the sky.
Treatment Draft
A girl named Tsukiko is looking out the window one clear night when she sees a shooting star. Much to her surprise the star lands with an audible splash in the pond out behind her house. Quickly Tsukiko runs out behind her house and notices a little ball of light inside the pond. As she lifts the ball of light out of the pond it opens its eyes revealing that it is a creature and gets scared. Quickly it flies off behind a nearby rock and peeks out afraid. Tsukiko tries to call the creature but it is unimpressed. In a hurry Tsukiko runs inside and grabs some toys off her shelf and carries them with both arms, dropping a few on the way. When she returns outside she offers one toy, the star refuses to budge. Then she tries a jack in the box, it just scares the creature more. Lastly she goes to offer a teddy bear with a top hat, but she drops it. As the top hat drops off, the little stars face lights up and it rushes over to it and starts nudging it towards Tsukiko. Seeing that the creature likes the hat, Tsukiko picks it up and puts it on the creatures head. The creature now delighted starts floating around happily and dreamily. Tsukiko walks inside and closes the door. As she looks to the window she sees the creature hovering there with a sad look. She opens the window and it flies in and rests on the end of her bed. Tsukiko giggles to herself and closes the window then hops into bed herself.
Notes
This is intended as an origin story of the little star character. After this the travels these 2 go on is akin to a show like adventure time.
A Quick concept of the Star creature behind the rock
- A lonely girl living in a field gets a surprise one night when a star falls from the sky.
Treatment Draft
A girl named Tsukiko is looking out the window one clear night when she sees a shooting star. Much to her surprise the star lands with an audible splash in the pond out behind her house. Quickly Tsukiko runs out behind her house and notices a little ball of light inside the pond. As she lifts the ball of light out of the pond it opens its eyes revealing that it is a creature and gets scared. Quickly it flies off behind a nearby rock and peeks out afraid. Tsukiko tries to call the creature but it is unimpressed. In a hurry Tsukiko runs inside and grabs some toys off her shelf and carries them with both arms, dropping a few on the way. When she returns outside she offers one toy, the star refuses to budge. Then she tries a jack in the box, it just scares the creature more. Lastly she goes to offer a teddy bear with a top hat, but she drops it. As the top hat drops off, the little stars face lights up and it rushes over to it and starts nudging it towards Tsukiko. Seeing that the creature likes the hat, Tsukiko picks it up and puts it on the creatures head. The creature now delighted starts floating around happily and dreamily. Tsukiko walks inside and closes the door. As she looks to the window she sees the creature hovering there with a sad look. She opens the window and it flies in and rests on the end of her bed. Tsukiko giggles to herself and closes the window then hops into bed herself.
Notes
This is intended as an origin story of the little star character. After this the travels these 2 go on is akin to a show like adventure time.
A Quick concept of the Star creature behind the rock
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